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  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there

    OK, I can't review this because I can't find a thing wrong with this. It says everything it should say, and I love it, because at heart, I am very ...

    May 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    That's OK, you did what I wanted by telling me what I could do to improve it.

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: There are Rumors That I Have Become a Haunted House.

    Is this done?

    May 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    That's OK, you did what I wanted by telling me what I could do to improve it.

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Fall Of Us

    Thank you! I'm quite glad you enjoyed it.

    May 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The song of the elements

    OK

    May 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    One thing you should know, is that the girl killed herself. I thought I made that clear, but apparently I could do a better job. I will work on adding ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Sweet girl, Sweet baby,

    I know, Cinderfoot. I know.

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Fall Of Us

    I understand, and thank you for your words, because this is my first try at poetry, and I'm not that good at it.

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Fall Of Us

    I will punish you by taking your book!

    May 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Invisible

    Yes I did like it. It is very good.

    May 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    The only reason I put a prologue in here is because later on she will end up being the reason for many things in this story.Thank you for pointing out ...

    May 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    Thanks. I really appreciate reviews like this. They help me to become a better writer, and also to make this story more likable. Yes, it is meant to be vague. ...

    May 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    I know, and am glad it didn't cause you to dislike this book.

    May 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Burning Fire~ Prologue.

    I know, and am glad it didn't cause you to dislike this book.

    May 15, 2014


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger