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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Grief in a New Era

    I actually love this. The narrator is great and the contrast between their narration and the world they're living in is really entertaining. I especially love their melodramatic tone (it ...

    Nov 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Aroma of Yesterday

    Thank you for the kind words. Im surprised and glad that something I wrote had an impact on you. Go and make those memories, I am sure your dad will ...

    Oct 30, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Aroma of Yesterday

    Thank you so much :) Hearing that you liked it is really encouraging for me. I often find it hard to tell whether what I%u2019m thinking while writing is actually ...

    Oct 30, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Breath in Four Parts

    Thank you for the review, and for introducing me to the S%u2019more method! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the poem. You said that you couldn%u2019t quite connect them all to one ...

    Jun 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Breath in Four Parts

    Thank you for the review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the poem(s?); I spent a lot of time on the imagery. I agree that it does feel somewhat disconnected, especially the ...

    Jun 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Breath in Four Parts

    welp i accidentally commented

    Jun 4, 2025


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy