syzygy

Cheesy can be fun but if you don't want it to be cheesy, you could always ask somebody to be a co-writer, so they can help point out things before ...

Thank you so much! As a person who doesn't typically write poetry (like at all-), it means a lot to hear my ramblings are enjoyable. ^^

Aw, that would be sad. It's honestly a decent piece and if you just put a little bit of editing into it, I think it could be great!

It's so cute! I might ste- borrow it a few more times haha

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed! :D

I think a dark khaki or a goldenrod would look good, but that's just me. They're darker shades, but still pretty! Your review is very cute, I love the colors.

I'm not that good with BB Code, otherwise I would surely help you with that. I'm not sure Placeholder is even coded for YWS though, so that's probably why it ...

Love the template you were using, maybe try a darker/duller yellow though haha! It's very bright and I couldn't read it in the quotes:(

Yessiree, I sure did! :)

Oh, thank you for your feedback! It was quite helpful and I will be sure to make some of the edits you suggested! I will admit, it is very vague ...