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Hi! Thanks for the feedback :) She isn't actually a ghost, this is the first chapter of the whole book. It makes sense once you read on but I haven't ...

Hi! Thanks for the advice, yeah choppy sentences seem to be my weakness, i think its the way i read them aloud. Still everything needs work doing. Thanks for the ...

Hi, The character isn't actually a ghost, it is set in a dream that she has every night. Though i agree with you it is difficult to understand as its ...