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Re: Hands------A story of a fake Hael
Thanks for the help and i actually have ten chapters written! and i have not even tried to proofread yet! I want to finish and then flush out the ideas ...
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Re: Forgotten- Chapter 1
lots and lots of potential!
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: Hands------A story of a fake Hael
oops i am sorry i did not knoew all of this!
Jul 12, 2008 -
Re: prologue
I actually very much enjoyed it! Add some twists in there and the sentences are a little dense so you can shorten them and make some of them not as ...
Jul 12, 2008