tapatia

Hey Chakita1 Well, I must say that it is a great idea, of course you always come up with unusually sad ideas to write. Admit it. So Green told me ...

I like this version of your story better. I found out the relationship with her father, which makes much more sense as to why she mourns him. It's like, now ...

This is a very good story. I like it a lot. I especially like the way in which you write the dialouge very fitting to the era the story takes ...

in the beginning you had a little problem with point of view. you were referring to the character as 'me' or 'i' then referred to her as she? i would ...

:D love it, i like the way you write. it does seem like it's not the 21st century but a much older one. It did confuse me that you skipped ...