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It seems like a love poem and I don't doubt it is, It is good. In fact, you show real potential. I like your works. They are good. Nice use ...

sad, very sad. You have nice taste in usage. I like your style. I wouldn't read it everyday. Who knows? Maybe if you try hard enough, you may become the ...

I liked the last half. It was good. The use of realistic features is good for stories. this seems like a real/fiction story. Fun to read, it was. Keep writing.

A lot of questions, though they can be annoying at time, other times can add to the intrigue of the story. I red a poem once that was nothing, but ...

It was a good plot, but the use of copyrighted characters is plagerism and is illegal. I recomend you change the story a bit to make it your own.

I didn't read all of it, but I skimmed through it. It looks pretty good to me. I wish you luck in completing it. If you want to read a ...

Well, I'm guessing that this is a love story about a girl who gets used then abused. Depressing. However, nice use of situations. It seems that, it could happen.