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tgham99

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: ...

    Writing about characters writing? Yes please. But seriously, this was a good story and I like the way you introduced the fact that the narrator has never ventured out into ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dear Universe,

    This poem is worded so strongly that I literally feel like I'm the one who's suffering at the hands of the universe rather than the narrator themselves. Right off the ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Art » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Witches and Queens

    Omg, I just want to start this review by saying that this is most definitely art. I love the picture you painted of witches -- the comparison to Lucifer as ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: What made me who I am today?

    This is a very interesting prompt to address and I like that you went into such detail in regards to who you are and how your identity came to be. ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: My Essay on Dry Tortuga National Park

    Hey Lucy!! Tee here for a review. I typically only do peer reviews of essays in class so I apologize if this review isn't as helpful as I want it ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: tides of time

    Your voice is.. wow. I loved listening to it and the lyrics themselves are amazing as well which really ties everything together. 10/10 love it!! As for the lyrics themselves, ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: EPA

    This is a very interesting story that details the feeling of being torn between moving on and being held back by someone in our past. I think you do a ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Murder

    Hi there! Tee jumping in here for a review. This short story was super interesting for me to read because I always love stories that give us a look into ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Siempre

    Hi there! Jumping in for a review here. I was super excited to see a poem written in Spanish so I figured I would leave some feedback because it was ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Other » General, General Re: Characters for a Potential Story

    Some rambling notes in no particular order, so I apologize if it's super scatterbrained!! You mentioned wanting to couple up a couple of the characters, and right away I thought ...

    Jan 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: The Sheep and the Lion

    Hi there! Popping in for a review :) To start, I like the implementation of a rhyme scheme. It's a good way of keeping a steady rhythm flowing in the ...

    Jan 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: my little leo

    Before I review anything I just want to say that the picture literally ties this whole thing together and is almost enough to make me want my own kitten

    Jan 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Solo

    This is a very straightforward poem that really encompasses the painful feeling that accompanies the realization that "fate had other plans" for a relationship. I like the idea of using ...

    Jan 23, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Old Mr. Bell

    Ooh, this was a very interesting poem -- I like the supernatural aspect of it; the idea of seeing a ghost/the remnant of someone that's not really there is a ...

    Jan 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My princesses.

    You have a very good grasp of suspense -- the story kept me hooked all the way through to the end, and the plot twist right in the final lines ...

    Jan 23, 2020


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