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Thanks so much!

Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate your analysis and am glad you could relate to it. :)

Ha, I'm glad.

The awesomeness of this ALMOST makes up for your Dramione avatar. (I can't stand Draco, and I love Hermione to death.) Next time my ship sinks, this will be one ...

Yeah, exactly! Thanks for the review; I'm glad you liked the piece. :)

You're absolutely right about softening that part a bit; thanks for pointing it out, really helpful. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

My favorite line is life rubs me off good. Its like you're just a thin layer that life can rub off. Love the piece a lot.

Thanks for the review! :) I'm so glad you liked it so much.

Yeah! That'd be great fun; just send me a pm when you're ready for me to go through it and I'll see what I can do. :)

You're Welcome; it was a pleasure to read! It's a very interesting writing strategy you had for this piece; just writing what came to mind. Reminds me of stream of ...

Thanks! Your reviews have been really helpful and included stuff I didn't really think of. Thank you so much.

Thanks for the review! I love hearing your interpretation of the poem. :)

Thanks for the review! :) As far as 'drinking rain as some drink wine' putting a positive connotation on the water, I was going more for like she was sifting ...

Thanks so much for pointing out the parts that need improvement; I really appreciate that! This review was so helpful. :)

Oh, that makes a lot of sense now, thanks! That's some awesome symbolism then.