thegirlwhowrites

Hi! i really liked this short story, so orginal and written perfectly to get your message across. I do have one thing to say though: do you plan on continuing ...

hi! I loved this piece! The covabulary you chose to use throughout your writing I think really makes it what it is. I love how it's sort of old language ...

hi! I really like where this story is going and I'm happy you chose to re-look at it because now tha you're older you're probably moe experienced and can make ...

Hey! The title immediately drew me in, being a Passenger fan (it's the title of a song) >D I think this is actually a great piece of poetry, love the ...

Hi! Before I start I just want to add how I am just starting here, I (stupidly, I might add, as it was in the title) didn't realize this is ...

Hi! Wow, this was written exeptionally well, applause to you my friend! I have a couple of questions about what you wrote, parts of it I found were a bit ...

Hi! First of all I want to say I love the start! You begin describing such a sweet picture with the birds singing, blue skies, etc, everything which suggests a ...

Hi! I'm going to start off my saying that I truly love your writing. You have great, short descriptions which enable an image inside the reader's mind while at the ...

"Awww" is all that comes to mind right now... :"( That was so beautifully written, I truly mean it. No sappy, long, descriptions, just enough to get a taste of ...

Hi, thegirlwhowrites here for a review! Interesting story, I have to say I wasn't sure where you were going with this, if it was a personal diary entry or what ...

OOOOh cool I liked this! And it's not ususal for me to like these kiind of stories so I congratulate you for that ;) Lately I've been having a 'thing' ...

Hi! Thegirlwhowrites here for a review! :D I have to say I really did love your piece... Beautifully written, great amount of detail, now all I need is to hear ...

Hello! Cute short story, you've put so much feeling in such a short piece and for that I applaude you :) However, for the reader to feel more connected to ...

Hi, welcome to YWS! Cute poem! I would suggest next time not to use too much of the itallic, cursive fonts and capitalizing words just because it's more effective when ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Cute story. I liked reading it. I noticed that maybe you should try reading it in your head or out loud, because there are several occasions ...