thegirlwhowrites

Very nice idea, so orginal and I loved how it all revolved around the Christmas song and the second day. (Especially the connection at the ending with the two turtle ...

Brilliant rhythm! I can see how you tried hard to make it flow, making each line of 10 syllables and having a set rhyme scheme of ABAB. I think that's ...

Hi, Really cool idea, very original. Here are just a few criticisms from me and I hope they will help! 1. "*You're on key island" (not your) 2. I just ...

Wow. Am I even going to mention how jealous I am of you? :D I could never write such a beautiful and meaningful poem and I just really want to ...

Hi, Lovely story :D (well, not so lovely for the character) My favourite part was when you described his love for Maria, I thought that was exactly what you needed ...

Hi, I have a few comments to make, hope they'll help! 1. Your style of writing seems informal, as if this was a diary entry. It is absolutely fine to ...

Wow, nice alternate ending.. finally a happy end for our little mockingjay :') I have a few just small criticisms to make, hope they'll help! 'Katniss stirred next to me.' ...

(Huge HUnger Games fan just sayin ;) ) I really loved how you represented Finnick's character. How he changes throughout your short story just really captures him as a whole. ...

I am a big, big, big tribute and I've never read anything like this... really original! I would have never imagined Dale to be a ship to be honest :D ...

Oh, my everlark feels!! As soon as I started I knew I had to finish. The beginning is truly the best bit, when you answer those three questions and let ...

Hi, I'm a huge fan of The Hunger Games and I must say I really liked your poem. You were able to capture all the images in my mind from ...

I really enjoyed reading this. Beautifully written, simple but catchy and I loved how you kept it true to Suzanne's story. My favourite part was actually when went into depth ...