thegoldenbird

By putting this work in the category "Romance", I meant to suggest literary romance, as in romanticizing. The first monsoon shower has been left incomplete so that it could mean ...

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Thank you for your words of appreciation, M. I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you for the appreciation. When I am in nature, I find myself looking at all the little things in wonder and it is as though a part of me ...

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I meant 2016 :D

It feels silly to me that I often suggest other writers to use punctuation and I forgot to use it! This was an early work (notice that it says 2017) ...

Thank you for the detailed review. I have made a few changes to resolve the inconsistencies in the text that you pointed out. Hope you like it better now. Do ...

I have given the reality a name and made changes in accordance to it. Hope it brings the desired clarity. Thank you for your review!

I have made the suggested changes. Hope it refined the work. Thank you for your constructive criticism!

I have made the suggested changes. Hope it refined the work. Thank you for your constructive criticism!

The poem is short and precise, although it could be elongated to fit in emotions. At the moment it sounds more like a news report. You could also touch up ...

Written on 20th Jan 2017

This was such a good story! I haven't read a story like this in a long time. In fact, this was unique, different even from every other unexpectedly twisting story ...