thegoldendragon

HA HA HA, that was awesome, I like the rhyming, and it was especially funny at the end when it said he read it upside down. What kind of test ...

HA HA HA, that was awesome, I like the rhyming, and it was especially funny at the end when it said he read it upside down. What kind of test ...

You do a good job with dialogue, but what the heck is happening? there are spaces in between the chapters that a lot happens. Who is Val? Landlord? Everyone else? ...

I like the idea. The angle/demon struggle is cool. I like the end, and how it could either hook you on to the story, or end it there. Sorry if ...