thehumanroach

Thank you Zerkk! :smt003 *and Blue Rubies =P

Could you guys point out some of the exact errors in a couple lines? I'm afraid that I just don't get what I did wrong, and I'd like to know ...

Thoughts of a Silent Romantic As time draws on, we older grow and part, Our tired lives still fail to link as one, And schisms occur in my lonely heart. ...