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Hello, I guess I'm going to be the first one to answer this thread... ;) Hope you like romance, since I really need someone to review my short story. Here's ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on the story. I brushed a piece of her purple highlights from her face ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. The sound of his voice gave me goose bumps, the way he ...

If you haven't read part one, I recommend you do it, since you'll be confused. ;) FOR PART 1- When Sam saw me, he smiled and spread his arms so ...

Some of you might have read this before. It's a story I called Another Gaze before, but I wrote a little bit more on the subject and I've separate it ...

Lilymore, your poem has been reviewed. :) Anyone else needs a review?

Hello there, I'm here as requested. :) I really like this poem, but I feel like you could go on for a little bit longer then what you have right ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with nitpicks, but there won't be too much since everyone already pointed them out... And I just don't mean friends, I want us to be ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression of your story. She was six months pregnant, single and very, very lonely . ...

Hello there. :) I just found one nitpick, and here it is. And when you’re done comma, the stars will be there to replenish you. This is the best therapy ...

Hello there. :) So I was going to review your stuff, but then it seems you don't want people to read it? First off, I want to say that critics ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. Not Her . He turned and looked at me, a hand ...

I went on vacation in Greece for the last two weeks and I took some photos there that I thought I should share with you. First, I want to say ...

Jas, I'm glad to say your review is done! Anyone else up to give me some work?

Hello there, I'm here as requested! :) Plot wise this was really good. The idea is a little bit cliche, since it's always the girl that gets beaten up, and ...