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Hello there. :) Aw twilight... The books were amazing, but the films deceived me. But anyways, you, my friend, did a really great job at reproducing it. I really like ...

Hello there. :) I really liked this story. I read it before, but I was to busy to review it, but here I am! It was well written and I ...

Hello there. :) Just a couple more minutes and I’m out of here. That was the only thing Macey could think about. Put it in italics so we know she's ...

Hello there. :) I'm not really an expert on this, but I seriously doubt any guy is going to want to pick you up while you're wearing a Harry Potter ...

Hello there. :) She was with my best friend, and he comma nor my fiancée comma had any idea that I had met that woman before. I had met her ...

Hello there. :) I 'm was a prisoner once. This part right here doesn't make sense. Once relates to something that was in the past, well in fact you are ...

Hello there. :) This was really good. Short and sweet is good sometimes. But you could also add a little more information and dialogue in this, and it would more ...

These blinking stars above me, Form a darkening globe enveloping me. You are one of the broken lights, Carelessly watching over the world. The burden that was dragging you. Secrets ...

Hello there. :) Above her S he was aware of a twinkling light above her that startled her out of her reminiscing. Looking back up at him, she saw that ...

Hello there. :) I think Hockey fan already said a lot, but I still have some things you could improve. Today was going to be the start of my new ...

Hello there. :) First one to review! Woo, not like I'm usually not because I just don't have a life like that. ;) We then did our secret handshake we ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. Many thoughts come into mind when I think about what waits ...

Hello there. :) Well, well... These are some pieces of art! Your portraits are accurate and they could easily be photos in black in white. I'm jealous of your charcoal ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on my overall impression of your story. It took up all my guts but I had to do it. ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then move on to my overall impression. " That’s just it,” he said. “I wonder, but I don’t know what about. ...