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I'ma be back to review this, but THIS is the length I'm talking about, IF NOT longer.

Thank you hop

Thank you for the review! I always thought that no one shares their experiences with these kinds of things, and mine was so full of nonsense, that I might as ...

Anytime!

You used guitar for backgrounds? That's cool! When I made this it was because I was humming in the shower. I had no intentions of adding to it, and I ...

Omg, I love seeing every ones opinions, haha. Thank you for the review, Xaria and Rayla are so fin to write about, you'll see more of it later. And Ryker ...

Thank you for the review! I'm already adjusting that first scene. I completely agreed with things being said, and so its being adjusted. I'll make some posts and comments when ...

This was fixed

The other thing is that she lacks proper education. You're right, her household dynamic is very messy and its ruled in an odd way. Shes expected to dress a certain ...

The other thing is that she lacks proper education. You're right, her household dynamic is very messy and its ruled in an odd way. Shes expected to dress a certain ...

The other thing is that she lacks proper education. You're right, her household dynamic is very messy and its ruled in an odd way. Shes expected to dress a certain ...

The other thing is that she lacks proper education. You're right, her household dynamic is very messy and its ruled in an odd way. Shes expected to dress a certain ...

AHHHH! THANK YOU, IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!! I do agree, now that I look back on it. I have an idea for a way to rewrite that first scene ...

Haha! Thank you for the review! Dakota is definitely something, isnt he? Definitely a headache for Khailen. Yes, eventually down the story line, Raylene actually becomes Carmon's wife.. Until the ...

Ahhh! I think you'll like the second part! Dakota is.. Messy in it! SYSTEM DOWNFALLL! WOOO! I have more from the second half, I just have yet to post it. ...