thewritingdoc

Hey there! I'm Tennis, newly returned long-time YWS-er, after a two year hiatus. Poetry is my specialty, and the title of your piece intrigued me. Thus, allow the reviewing to ...

Hey! First, I would like to say I'm happy to be back here at YWS after about a two or three year hiatus. The truth is, that I miss writing. ...

I loved it ! Write more SOON !!!! (sarcasm) :xd: :elephant:

A boy found a book this book was a special creation In it was the story of the world And everyone's narrations The intro wasn't bad... but I would change ...

Come hither,oh ye prince charming where art thou lost? thy maiden fair awaits thy coming for thee,she misses most thy sweet face she longs to see in her hands a ...

Four roses grew in the hidden glade, Four roses, tall and bright, With velvet petals all adorned. Surrounded by a shining light. The first rose was purest white, rhyming is ...

Wooooooooooot! Impressive piece of poetry. I really enjoyed it. Awesome imagery, and use of vocab. The only little thing was in a couple of spots, the flow of the poem ...

Hi, I'm tennis! Okay, so to start off... the hook was ineffective. In fact, the first stanza was counter-productive. It bored me as a reader due to the lack of ...

Ohhh, I liked this! I really did. I wish I could write this way :( I recoiled. I wouldn't use the word recoiled in this instance. You already bombard the ...

Hello! I'm tennis. Here is your review: The loneliness sings a lullaby to me,One that cannot induce any sleep, felt like there should have been a period after induce. It ...

Very sweet of you to write to your mom. When I have a son, I hope he loves writing just as much as I do. You're great (: I'm tennis, ...

Short but sad :( I could make that emotional connection to the piece... By the slick surface of the pond. I wouldn't have used the word slick here..don't think it ...

Hey, I'm Tennis!! Welcome to YWS! Oh boy, I remember the first day I signed up... good times, good times. I hope you enjoy our community, enhance your writing experience, ...

Talk about an impressive ending! Sheesh, I was overwhelmed. Very intricate title, indeed. For the most part, I thought this was fabulous. It's a style of poetry I don't think ...

I stare at the wall but my mind wonders into the depths of my thoughts, line sounded awkward to me. Try cutting it up a bit, often works well with ...