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I really love the emotion in this piece. So powerful. With just a bit of editing (for grammar and such) it would be worthy of publishing! :)

This is such an amazing poem! I love it :) You are very talented, keep writing! I have nothing really critical to say, sorry.

I feel this as very strong and edgy, I agree it is rude. But it's to the point where I really like it. Great job :)