thunder_dude7

I think the word said shouldn't be used much, because using it over and over again is really boring. Picture this: "Run!" Liat said. BORING! It also doesn't help the ...

Xaviar: Hey, Rem. I was just calling to say that I'd be glad to babysit your son. I'll see you then! *click* Xaviar's answering machine: Hey, this is Xaviar. Either ...

I, personally, tend to start out my stories with a "What if" statement. As in, "What if there were people with elemental powers on another planet?" I then expand, making ...

Overall, it is very good. The only thing I wasn't crazy about was the sudden mentioning that he was in turmoil. In the first paragraph, it seems he is very ...