tigeraye

Wow, are you sure you don't write poetry? If not, you should. This is a really, really nice effort. Really crisp and interesting choices in imagery, very thought-provoking and emotionally ...

Hello, Overall, I like this poem. a lot The scattered form is interesting -- it's very chaotic and scrambled, yet at the same time the narrator's anguish really pulsates through ...

This is quite a bit different than the other poem you have posted to the side of the page, "Masks"...whereas "Masks" is wordy and insightful, this poem is about as ...

This is overall a really cool visual, and I like the idea at all. Reminds me of one of those posters hanging on the wall of an English classroom, or ...

Something about the form of this poem just throws me off, especially the form of the first half. I don't know why it's disjointed other than just for the sake ...

You have a nice sense of poetic form. The way the words are layered on the page is very poised and focused. Though its a simple centered-alignment, I think it ...

Hmm, I like this one a lot. Very simple but well done. Perhaps you can a bit more mindful of where you put your punctuation, just so that it flows ...

Two problems with this poem: A. You're telling and not showing. I wish the first stanza had the speaker show us what his strife feels like instead of just saying ...

You do a nice job of capturing happiness mixed with sorrow. Overall a nice effort. Your biggest problem is that you include a lot of words that aren't really necessary. ...

A pretty unique and interesting poem. Your use of the language is vivid and I think this poem is quite complete as it is. It's a masterpiece audibly, everything flows ...

First off I think the review below is fairly ********. The breadth of your vocabulary is quite astounding, and you shouldn't have to hide that just because the person below ...

The Shakespearean influence is obvious (even without the "summer's end" line) and your style of writing is intriguing to read. But I think through the haze of your elevated language, ...

I like this poem much more. You're great at conveying grief and angst, there's an anger in the speaker's voice that really shines through. I would play around with form ...

This poem doesn't quite hit the mark for me. I think it's because you're trying to describe this unknown world light years away from us, yet you use imagery from ...

I think your poem could benefit quite a bit from playing around with form. Since this site's editor is terrible, what you could do is take a screenshot of a ...