tigerlover98

Gracias for your reviews. I'm thrilled that you like this, because this is my first poem.

There was a girl named Alice Poole, And she really was quite the fool, For what caused her untimely doom, All started in her own room. Her mother nagged her ...

That's a really nice poem. However, just like the comments before, it is a little too short. I'm not going to say a lot, because I'm new to Young Writers ...

Thanks for the review. And your right. Most of the mistakes were typos. The only thing I didn't change is the idea part. I want to keep it simple there.

That was really good. I really like poetry, but I'm really bad at it. I just can't find good rhyming words.

In the December of 2006, during the Christmas break, on that fateful day, my friend and I had an ingenious idea. We wanted to go sledding. My friend, Annie, and ...