tiggpanda145

Hi there, it's tiggpanda145! Well done, I really like your poem and it contains some great descriptions. I especially like 'or maybe it could be the rain that falls from ...

I like this piece! It is really interesting and carries a very strong message. Especially at the end when you say 'And be an inspiration.' It just reinforces your message ...

Wow! This is a really interesting poem...what inspired you to write this? One thing, I'm guessing you meant 'unearthed' instead of 'uneathed'(probably just a typo). The imagery is good and ...

Wow, I cannot criticise this-it is so emotive. I can feel tears in my eyes which is very unusual for me! Thank you for sharing this with me. This story ...

Hello! This poem is great and really effective! It created a really vivid image of this lonely landscape and of the fox. You can tell that you spent time crafting ...

Wow! That's really good! You did really well with the rhyming and your spelling and punctuation was good! I can't really think of any improvements! Ooh, probably just a typo ...

Hello! I really like the idea-set in the future with a new World War! Awesome! Firstly, in the second sentence I think that there is a repitition of 'face' which ...

I really like this short story thing! It is really accurate-that's exactly how I feel when I can't think of anything to write but I want to! Although you could ...

I liked this poem-I could tell you had put lots of feeling and emotion into it and spent some time on thinking about imagery, your thoughts and feelings and the ...

Interesting poem-deep! I like the way it's quite 'abrupt' and 'sharp' like a razor if you get what I mean. When I read it I said the lines in my ...

Well done that's a good poem! Remember to put in capital letters at the right time and vary your punctuation (put commas for flow etc.) and maybe a full-stop at ...

When I saw the title of your poem I was trying to imagine how exactly it would be written; writing a birthday poem it is so easy to do a ...

That's a good poem! The descriptions are very good and give you a sense of place. The idea is very good and you have used lots of ambitous vocabulary too. ...