tiggpanda145

This is supposed to be a review-forgot to change it to a review-sorry! :)

oops I didn't change it to review-it's supposed to be a review type thing-sorry! :)

Wow! Thats really good! It has real depth and you have to search for meanings as it could be interpreted in many different ways. The portrayal of death is really ...

I really like this poem and the idea is great! I love the idea of paint etc. but you could have split it up and used some punctuation. Colour is ...

That was a really good story! Well done! The plot was good and you used some ambitious vocabulary. However, as mentioned in the previous review, you could have varied sentence ...