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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Something

    hehe, I liked this, I think it has a sort of nursery rhyme feel, but at the same time, it's older than that. It made me laugh too. My only ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Your Lies

    aww, I loved this poem :) Although the topic was a little cliche, I think it was brilliant. It was sad, but not too emotional at the same time. It ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Too late

    Hello Bamboozler ^_^ I really liked this poem, even though it's short, and has a few problems (which can easily be fixed :)) I thought that the faint imagery and ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: To None I Can Remember

    Here to bamboozle you ^_^ I thought that this was brilliant :) (although I didn't really understand it, for me it was some sort of hazy reckoning of defiance and ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Penny Lane

    (before I review, I just wanted to say, that even though when you think about it, you are not ON the bus, it's not very obvious to some people, I ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Best Friend

    Here to bamboozle you ^_^ I really liked this poem, it's good that you know that your poems have gotten better, and that you admit that this isn't your best ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Jelly Beans

    Hi Power Ranger! Here to bamboozle you ^_^ First off, I really loved this poem, it was sweet and tasted yummy - no, I did NOT try to eat the ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sincerely, Brain

    Wow, I really loved this :) It was amazing how you could portray sincere emotion, yet make it humourous at the same time ^_^ pffflee this is such a terrible ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cannibal Fame

    Wow. I am literally at a loss for words. I doubt that I'll ever say this is the best poem I've ever read, yet for what it is, it's brilliant. ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I wonder Why

    Just, well, hmmm... I can't even go into the poem itself here, I didn't check, are you new? Although I'm sure we all love the rainbow, we would prefere BLACK ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Edge of Insanity

    Well, first off, welcome to YWS! I really liked this poem, and freeverse is fine, it doesn't make it any less of a poem/less epic ^_^ (also, teardrop suggested google-ing, ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Amazing Poem

    Wow. This was just so brilliantly funny, yet simple :) I really have nothing to add, except: I think, you should say the tangerine is "pink" ;) Green just doesn't ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rejection

    well, first off, I really liked this ^_^ it was emotional, yet not too cliche, and very interesting xD I'm afraid to say, although stargazer9927 split your stanzas up for ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nike - acrostic poem

    Acrostic poems are really cool, and well I loved this one. ^_^ I had to do them in school about four years ago, and they were all to do with ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Trust

    Hi! Well, I'd love to say I really loved this poem, but, um I didn't. I'm not saying you're not a good writer (because you probably are ^_^) or that ...

    May 1, 2011


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind