tommyknocker

Hi! After the reading this story i feel a bit...Muddled. Is that the right word? Not sure. Anyhow. A guy gets shot, and I'm i like yeah okay this sounds ...

I based this story off the Everly Brothers. "Crying in The Rain." *Please note. This is a, "Tape recording." "If I wait for cloudy skies, you won't no the rain ...

Hi. I really liked this story and it was a breeze to read. No clumsy errors and grammar But i think, when you change perspective and tell us that you ...

Well with the amount of reviews there's no point in me saying much. It's basically all being covered. Great Job. ~ T.K

Hi. I liked this piece. But, i come away feeling muddled. Perhaps that's just me. Probably is me. So don't worry. Anyhow, i really liked your use of descriptions throughout ...

Hi. Thanks for this story. I especially liked the start. Really good! However, at the start of the middle section. This slightly confused me. Perhaps it was the sudden change ...

Hello there! I think that this is really good solid story. I agree with Azila, this is very good for young children. Really sweet and full of fun, (if the ...

Hi. I don't know what the Canadian Women's Suffrage is either. Suppose that has something to do with me being half a world away. Anyhow, i think this has potential. ...

Ah, yes. The classic step mother story. This reminds me about a C.S.I episode i watched last night. I think the use of a disgruntled child, coupled with a step ...

Wow I'm really confused by this. I think you repeat Rainbow Supreme too much. It makes me think his some exotic pizza.

Hi, I'd just lie to say how much i thoroughly enjoyed this story and in no parts was it boring. However, i feel that this could have some more description. ...

Okay, i enjoyed this story. However, i feel the main character is a tad strange. Why would you just walk over to a car, see that it was open and ...

Hi all thanks for posting your comments. Immediately after i woke up i wrote this story (?) don't know why. It just came to me. Anyhow, i should make things ...

Hi, hope this is in the right place. It's not lovey lovey stuff. But it's, Romancy." Oh, Evelyn. Why? That's what i ask. You never gave me an answer. Our ...

Admittedly, I've never been a fan of stories about animals. But how wrong can one person be? I enjoyed it, and i actually felt sad for the cat. This reminds ...