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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lullaby

    I think commas are used a bit too much, and there is like literally one spelling error involving "you" to "your" in the fifth stanza. Nonetheless, I like the concept ...

    Sep 11, 2020


The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
— Unknown