tswizzy22

Hello! To start out I really like all the world building you put into this. I could tell that while the war happened in the past, it still had a ...

I thought it was really good. It almost felt like an extended poem at times. Like someone else mentioned, I'm not sure that someone would know that what they were ...

First of all your first few sentences.... I love them a lot. Hooked me basically instantly. You mentioned that the Gods were too afraid to speak up on their ideas ...

Hello! Definitely a good start that you have going here. I think all the imagery you include in your writing is fantastic. I could easily picture this entire coffee shop ...