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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Lies

    I think this is a really interesting piece. I enjoy the ambiguity of it where the reader is never quite given what the speaker is lying about. I'll admit I ...

    May 7, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: scream

    I completely relate to this. Sometimes I feel like a walking contradiction. It seems like the juxtaposition between excess noise and the absence of it is just so hard to ...

    May 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: short story opening chapter.

    Some quick editing things, in the first paragraph, wondered I think should be wandered. the phrase "swung back and forwards" sounds smoother as "swung forwards and back". Other than those ...

    May 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Missing One

    A quick typo to note: I'm sure tears should be years in the first sentence. I appreciate the unsaid that is left in the wake of the actions of the ...

    May 5, 2019


It's easier to come up with new stories than it is to finish the ones you already have. I think every author would feel that way.
— Stephanie Meyer