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*applauds* And you know why I like this so much? Because while pretty much all of the other "5 reasons why" posts are mostly opinion (and highly exaggerated opinion at ...

Ellette Brynn "I guess, but I don't think I can walk," Luna said. "You won't have to," Ellette cut in their talk. "All you have to do is lie still; ...

(Sorry I haven't posted yet. Never got around to it last night, and I just finished reading all the posts.) Ellette Brynn "We're on an island; it can't reach us," ...

Name: Linnea Brown (Goes by Lyn Lyn or Lynnie) Age: 17 Gender: Girl Appearance: Personality: She used to be fairly outgoing and energetic, but ever since she hurt her ankle ...

I'll post my profile soon!

Is this for a contest or something? Okay, so I feel kinda stupid for critiquing a fifty word story, but for some reason I feel compelled to. This is nice, ...

But wouldn't that get a bit... tedious? And, after all, the best things about it happened in spur of the moment. Even if we wrote it again, wouldn't it be ...

*Posting, so I'll be notified if someone actually does*

Cspr - technically, only a girl can volunteer for a girl. He wouldn't've been allowed to. Just so you know.

Name: Ellette Brynn Age: 13 Gender: Girl District: 5 Appearance/Picture: History: Ellette grew up on a small cattle farm with only two brothers. Her mother died when she was eight, ...

You could make it the Quarter Quell where the tributes were chosen by their district. That could make things interesting. Or you could make up a whole new one, as ...

I call a girl from District 5.

So, I have a couple of things. My first is kinda like Jagged's; I posted a writing a couple weeks ago ( ) and almost right away it said that ...

I like this... but it feels a little off to me. My eyes are automatically drawn to the blurred yellow ones in the back, and are constantly being pulled back ...

Yeah. :) But I think it would work just a teensy bit better if you replaced "feels" on the sixth line with "is." Could just be me thought. But this ...