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Re: bad comedy shows, sparkly vampires, cartoon villians, oh my!
Lalaland, No problem. I seriously did really like it. I'm glad you all like my script. It was my first one. I had just been browsing the scripts forum thingy ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: Crescents: Chapter 2
I absolutely loved it! Very interesting and creative. Keep on writing! :elephant: LOVE --ULTRAVIOLET
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Drenched in Rain
StoryWeaver, is this better? Or worse? I really do appreciate input. :smt001 :elephant: LOVE --ULTRAVIOLET P.S. Thanks Jessxrawkz! :smt003
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 1
Shade- How funny! And yes, I realized the present/past tense issue. I am paying special attention to this now, and am going to double and triple and so on check ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: I'd lie
Thanks guys. :) You know, it was fun to write this, but I would have nothing to write about. I don't read romance, so I could not come up with ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: I'd lie
Jasminebells. I'm not surprised that this reminded you of "I'd lie" by Taylor Swift. That's what originally gave me the idea. And as for the shortness of it all, yes, ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 1
You know Lilicia, your so right. Thanks for helping me pick out the flaws. :smt003 Does this description of Nancy seem better? Realistic? Input appreciated. And you like the ending? ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 1
Thanks Zibbie! Now that you bring it up, your suggestions do make it better. How do you like this start? Any better? I appreciate you taking the time to comment. ...
Apr 17, 2010