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I called her Rose. Rose for her soft red lips. Rose for her tall, slender, perfectly curved body. Rose for her delicate, silky skin. And rose for her thorns. ​These ...

This is good. Just one suggestion though, it's not necessary, but you could try following a more regular pattern so that the words flow off the tongue easier. Otherwise it ...

This is really good. And to snoweary, I think amethystnight didn't mean she had to drink her own blood but that she had to drink the blood that was given ...

Thanks picklesole and pettybage for commenting! I am very glad for your feedback and will try to use it. I probably won't continue with this story though, because like many ...

Good. Really good. Can't wait till next chapter. By the way, it's actually - pressing *two fingers *to the corners of her lips...

The Eyes That Forgive By Julia Sweeney My story is not a particularly interesting one. It’s not as though I’m insane, or sane for that matter, I just love the ...

I think it's really good. I didn't read the spoiler until I was almost halfway through but I got where you were going before that. Often my writing takes a ...

I like it. Definitely better then the history textbook and it got the point across better. Non-fiction is not my thing at all but I think you could make a ...

Awesome... totally creepy but really good, Raffi agrees. :D The way you described her mothers glee at Georgy seeing her was so creepy. I loved it. Does [i]hunger[i] mean something ...