valiant

Alright, I know I'm not supposed to summarize or anything, but I'd just like to say that this isn't a one shot, and I'm working on some more. I'm curious ...

I haven't worked on this for a while, and I'm looking to clean it up a bit before getting too much back into it. Just looking for some feedback as ...

Same as with chapter one, I'm looking to get this looked over by a couple people and get some feedback as to where I should start in on cleaning this ...