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So ok ...........You told a story of a runaway in a poem and her dad or boyfriend ends up finding her because shes dead and hes dead so thats why ...

I didn't really consider this a poem more or rather it being your thoughts on paper which is fine. You should tell him how you feel ...........who knows maybe he ...

I rolled my eyes and walked out the door. I walked to school. I took the alley way to school. I felt an erie feeling. I walked around corner. The ...

There was no flow to your poem but I got the message that you were trying to get across. Finals arean't really a big chunk of your grade I mean ...

Wow the first line of your story had me hooked and then I couldnt stop reading. Only once did I stop reading did I realize how long chapter one was. ...

um so your poem was alright but as l read along l couldnt help but feel like some of the flow in the poem was forced......l dont know but thats ...

l really liked your poem and the way you see the world as l right?This is the first piece i've ever seen by you and look forward to reading more ...

First off I wanna say l never laughed so hard in my life. l loved everything about it and as l read on l got lost in the story. l ...

Okay so I had to google a couple words......LOL but overall I really........loved it! and believe me thats saying alot. you have a really nice flow that goes along with ...

Wow! you are the best...lol I loved it and as I was reading it I couldnt help but feel like you were talking to a younger you...but then again that ...

So first I want to say welcome to yws and its a pleasure! Now down to the nitty gritty I read your other piece wishes and although it wasnt the ...

I really liked the message that you were trying to get across to your sister. Although it's good that you write your feelings down telling your sister how you feel ...

I would review this poem but you didnt write it so I dont see the point. the poem didnt really say where the girl was going or how long they've ...

I just wanna start off by saying that I love the topic that you chose to write about. Just know this, my dear, that whenever 'tis night And the moon ...

HIYA! I liked how your prolouge left readers wanting more. You started it off with two people talking and left us wondering where exactly is she going? overall I like ...