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Re: Confusion
Just let me start off by saying AWESOME! at first i read it and im like 'this is really good' then i seen your only 13. wow you have pure ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: The End
Ok I think that the topic you choose was good but you have a few grammer mistakes here and there but one thing that confused me was where the train ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Sky Sisters
I loved the topic that you choose to write on. At first I thought that you were reffering to sky sisters as the sun and the moon and then you ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Echoes
I like the fact that your poem is short and simple but it got to the point and told us a story that left us to wonder. overall I enjoyed ...
Jun 8, 2011
