vampireacademyfreak3

um i didnt get the ninja thing

i love the topic of the story and the way you wrote you've got great potential keep up the good work:)

the concept of your poem is very good but not always true

i like this

fear.........

very soulful

i like the story behind the poem

keep riting i can see that you've got potential

that is the best poem by far

pretty good topic theme

good..........................good

that was good

your sisters got some talent

that was pretty good if you want a suggestion for the title i think it should be- the other side of me overall: 10/10

i didnt really get it