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  • WRFF Archive Re: Step Right This Way!

    Please review this short story/ flash fiction (depending on your definition of either one) a friend of mine has asked me to write this for her art exibit, and I ...

    Feb 24, 2021
  • WRFF Archive Re: Im accepting!!

    Hi, this is a short story of mine (it’s more of a flash fiction really) for you to review please :)

    Feb 23, 2021
  • Will Review For Food Re: General Request Repository

    please review my short story

    Feb 7, 2021


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien