veeren

Besides the little grammatical errors here and there, I thought this was a wonderful poem. The 'secret' message was also a nice touch. Me being a guy trying to get ...

I don't usually read poetry, so you probably shouldn't take what I say to heart, but I liked this poem. It's true the lack of punctuation did turn me off ...

This was very well written. There was a nice use of detail that didn't go overboard or make me bored reading through it. It would definitely make a great scene ...

Now this was fun to read. A bit pointless but still fun. The way it was written was really cool to me, and you described the... flies... pretty well. All ...