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vertigo1

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Society

    I really enjoyed it. The rhythm somehow fits the idea behind the poem, I loved that, especially the first stanza. Also the examples chosen are spot-on. Wear our clothes and ...

    Aug 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: The Interview

    I would try and play around with it a little to add more rhythm Oh, what's your hobby? - I teach. Yeah. But, hobbies? - I prepare lecture sheets and ...

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Spark to write again

    Loved it from the very first lines. I tried pushing myself, even taking a break I can't express just how much I relate to this. All I needed was a ...

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Lyrics » Satire, Literature Re: Randy Savage Concept Rap

    Unfortunately I probably don't get the WWE references, but in terms of rap it's quite good and I enjoyed it. Bam! Chop! Swoosh! Smack! Ric Flair is whack! The last ...

    Aug 20, 2015


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott