vitamere

Hi there! I appreciate the review. Let me give you some background on why I wrote the way I wrote. So this was actually an assignment for my Romantics period ...

I liked the simplicity and brevity of this poem. I think it captures a lot of the same feelings in unrequited love. You captured this in the brilliant juxtaposition of ...

Interesting comment. What makes you think it was narrated by someone "mentally disabled"? And what do you mean by "mentally disabled"?

Thanks so much for your thoughts! I will definitely take them into consideration while editing (again).