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Re: Fine Lines
it's good but it seems like it's written in two halves that have been a little bit carelessly combined but then again mabye it's just me...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Fade away
wonderfully portrayed i can really relate to this poem too overall five stars
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: the vampire
i'm afraid i have to agree with kioneslayer it lacks emphisis it's a wonderful piece of work though, i enjoyed reading it
Jan 12, 2008