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  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: The Runaway

    Hey really nice storry? Are you a long time writer or did you just start writing? I want to say few thing that could really help you! Take words as ...

    Aug 24, 2018


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge