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Re: Nature's Elements - Chapter Two
Dear Jai, In your review, you have noted that Sophie can't know all of those things. It's simple. In the next chapter or so, I have clearly noted out that ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
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Dear Kaitlin, Your narrative poem is excellent, but I do think that you could do a little better. And try and make it easier for people to understand what your ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Caged - Ch. 1
Well, I don't know really what to say, but I guess I can say this story is..... AWESOME!
Dec 26, 2010