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aye at the end i was trying real hard to hurry because i like really had to leave for school but next time ill try and do it on the ...

It was nice. I liked it in the middle I was caught and hung in the poem. I wish I could write poems some times, but I don't really know ...

haha you should make that into a song

I can completely relate, only I was thinking of a girl the whole time.

thanx

Thanks ill try to make it less like that because as far as im conserned twilight was really the only book i actually "listened" to and i got a lot ...

I thought this was an excellent example suspense and I can't wait to hear more from this story.

I thought it was really good. I want to read more to like find out whats going on. You did a great job at leaving the audience in suspense.

Sorry I wrote this at like 4 in the morning and i just realized how stupid it sounds and how much it doesnt make since. Im gonna try rewriting it ...

ur "nit-picking" is helping me understand what i could fix. I probably shouldve put in the story, tho, that they werent real assassins they were a poser gang

nice i thought it was really good i hope ill get to see the other parts to the story soon

thanks ill try writing a whole novel

i think it was nice beceuse thats what normal life is liek

that was a pretty nice story.