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  • Art » Chickens, Dramatic Re: A day in the life of an ordinary chick

    woah, this is so unique!! I was expecting something written but I'm so glad I came across this. this is the first time that I've seen artwork here. your drawing ...

    Feb 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Resolutions

    hello!! to put it simply: this poem is beautiful. everything about it is so well put together and i adore the whole "time" theme. each line is so meaningful, and ...

    Feb 10, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Goodbye Poem.

    hello!! this is a very beautiful poem. you described growth so well, the idea of striving for a better life, then realizing that YOU have to give yourself that life, ...

    Jan 29, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Art of Deception.

    hello! welcome to YWS 😃 I love this piece so much. The suspense and drama, the entire impression of it is so enthralling, it's very poetic. I love how the ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Millennium Later - Chapter One

    hello! welcome to YWS first of all, I need to applaud you for your cliffhanger. so well written 👏. I really enjoyed this first chapter because of the suspense. Writing ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: People Like Us

    hello!! welcome to YWS I find this entire poem very beautiful. I love how it's a comparison of lost people and found people, and how none of them have perfect ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky of Imagination washed away

    hi! you did such a good job of portraying the whole theme (which is growing up, I believe) throughout the entire poem. and I LOVEE angsty poetry and just in ...

    Jan 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: the poems i write at unholy hours of night

    hello!! okay firstly the title, it's so captivating and eye-catching. It resonates with the poems since you can have so many strange thoughts and random poem ideas (mostly) at night. ...

    Jan 15, 2023
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: to you, my love from far away

    hello! okay, first of all, I love the whole aesthetic setup for this. your mood board really matches up with it, and I love the vocabulary you use throughout the ...

    Jan 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Dark Truth E.1

    hi, welcome to YWS! I really enjoyed reading your piece, it has so much potential. I don't usually read horror stories, but this, I found quite intriguing. (note: everyone has ...

    Jan 4, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: the yellow alarm clock

    Hi! This was a great read, short and sweet. I love how you wrote the dialogue, " "Okay." I hug him back. "Understandable, I guess. 'Cause you're my bestie. But ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Will Love You for the Rest of My Life [bonus]

    I really enjoyed this poem. You did an amazing job with the rhythm and flow of the poem, it's so nice to read and I love the rhyme, the words ...

    Jan 3, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The story of Lisa, the burning fire girl

    Hi, this was a great read and I really enjoyed it. I love how you split up parts into small chapters, but throughout chapters 11 to 14, I feel you ...

    Jan 3, 2023


Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
— Enid Bagnold