whitewolfpuppy

Hey! I'm back and ready to review the next part of your novel! :D Comments Great! I like how it is evenly flown through the paragraphs, though I do have ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx from the Knights of the Green Room, I will be reviewing your poem today. :) Comments You did a great job, the poem is nice and ...

Hey there! I am Onyx from the Knights of the Green Room and I am here to review your poem! :) Comments Didn't find anything grammatically wrong here. You did ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx from the Knights of the Green Room and I will be reviewing your poem today. :) Comments Great job with the poem! You keep a good ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today! :) Comments Alright, why are the fonts so different? :O That might be a technical error but it ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your novel today. :) Comments Great job all together! I really liked it and it defiantly draws me in to read ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your short story today! :) Comments Very good story! I love it! You did a wonderful job! Most everyone does. This ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your poem today! :) Comments Just a viewing thing, I would break it down in verses. Just for most people, a ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your poem today! :) Comments You did a wonderful job! I like how you use your own experience at the end ...

Hey there! I am Onyx and I will be reviewing your short story today! :D Comments Great job! I like the story over all. You did well with the short ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your poem today! :D Comments Honestly, you did very well with this poem. I would say add the space between the ...

Hey there! I will be reviewing your poem today. :) Comments Great job! I would say you could change the long poem into verses. Sometimes the length tends to turn ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article as promised. Sorry this is later than expected! :( Comments So what is your thesis statement? For me, it ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today. :) Sorry this review is later than expected! :( Comments Good job! I like how the paragraphs match ...

Hey there! I'm Onyx and I will be reviewing your article today. :) Sorry this review is later than expected! :( Comments Why do you have some lines underlined? If ...