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wickedlylyrcal

  • Art & Photography Re: Side by Side

    I loved the transition from a simple sketch to black and white then a little color then full out detail. It was like watching one of those old school flip-books. ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Finn's Kingdom (chapter1-short)

    Hooray for zombie invasions! I loved it! I can't wait to read what happens next! *watches computer intently for another chapter*

    Apr 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Aborted Child

    Fantastic job! I did a super gasp when I came to then ending. It's so sad that thing like this do happen in the real world. It reminds me of ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beethoven's Virus

    Beethoven’s Virus Today was a good day. Today would be a good day for any writer that just sold their first book. Autumn walked down Patterson Street to get to ...

    Apr 8, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things

    I love it! You could definitely turn this int a dramatic novel!

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things

    I liked the poem very much. It held a lot of truth that people fail to see. Pretty girls do do ugly things.

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: An Ode To Mathematics

    You just spoke to me! That is how I feel about that damned subject. I also like how your poem was short, sweet and to the point.

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Dregan's Path Chapter 1: Trip

    Hmmmmm I like it! I like the fact that you're trying to break past the barrier that bi and gays can't have the same passion as heterosexual couples. In the ...

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Motel 66 (chapter 1)

    loved the creepy setting! a few punctuation errors but nothing to serious.

    Mar 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Suicide

    This is just one of those works that just make you want to cry for the poor character. Very well written!

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hello Again, Christmas.

    Hello! Fantastic poem! I could only wish that I was that good! This has got to be my favorite stanza: First snow, that crisp castor sugar, turns To grey, squeaking ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Discarded but kept for... stuff

    Very well written. I just wish there was more detail on what happen between the two characters. Maybe more detail on how the main character got in his situation. I ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Big Drama, Big Heart: Chapter One

    Chapter One: The Meeting “Katelyn will you calm down? You're acting like you're meeting them for the first time,” Renae' told me in the car on the way to the ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    *Pokes in her head* Hello all! I'm wicked. A devoted fan-girl of anime, yaoi, and Vic Mignona *0*. I just recently got into writing not more than two years ago. ...

    Nov 14, 2010


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien