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This is so strange. It's very honest and simple. In a good way though. The question I think would always be in anyone's mind when they call these types of ...

I agree with the other reviewer you should probably change the first line but the poem in itself has no real problems. I really like these last lines: 'twirl and ...

I loved it! It's a beautiful piece and the imagery is just... 'i need a rush, need to feel the thunder in my mind' I really like this line. I ...

I really liked this story. It's an intriguing idea and worked well. You also have great writing skills and don't make many errors if at all. :) You've got a ...

I agree this is a great foundation for a story. Just make sure to re-read your work also it would be good to clarify the ages as Benjamin could just ...

Hey this could be promising but there are a lot of errors in your punctuation and grammar and your sentences tended not to make sense at some points. But like ...