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hello (: thank you for the review!! >Adrian

Hello (: I took what you said into consideration while editing and I actually like my poem a little more now. Thank you for the review!

Hello (: Ayeeee thanks for the review once again my dude!!

you're welcome!!

Hello I'm here to review (: I honestly thought this was going to be something cool, and what I got was so much better. I love this. Good job. have ...

Sorry I'm not quite sure I understand? are you saying you want a follow up explaining how I was hooked or do you want me to rewrite with more detail? ...

Hello (: thank you for the review! I do love what you took from the poem!! and I will try to tag you in the next. thanks again (:

hello (: thank you for the review once again, Kara!

Hello (: thank you for all the kind words E.E! I really love what you found from the meaning and its pretty close to my meaning of it. but the ...

Hello (: I understand the flow is a little off, that's one of my main problems in a lot of my poems. I will work on that problem. thank you ...

hello (: this poem was actually supposed to be overly dramatic, which is why there's so much repetition. I will take all of what you said into consideration in my ...