wolfcub25

I absolutly love the Lion King. It is a great movie and an interesting choice to write a fan fiction about. A few things as the others have pointed out ...

This is such a good effort for your first attempt. Well done, I like how you have made up your own words, and definatly got the reference to the clock ...

This is a great piece of poetry. I love the depth and emotion that draws the reader in. I agree that the line "Your oxygen was the smell of my ...